Bus commuting

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My commuting is usually bicycle. But when rainy day, I use Bus aside from bicycle. 10 times ticket of bus is 17 Euro. It means one time is only 1.7 Euro. When I ride bus, I show QR code as bus ticket to bus driver. QR code is 1 hour available. So I can ride several buses by 1 ticket in 1 hour.

Bus commuting takes 50 miniutes from my home to my office by door to door. Because bus route is long. When I use bicycle, route is short and it takes only 15 minutes. I need sometihing which make me enjoy when I use bus.

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My commuting is usually by bicycle. But when it’s a rainy day, I use the bus. 10 bus tickets are 17 Euros. It means one ride is only 1.7 Euros. When I ride the bus, I show the QR code as the bus ticket to the bus driver. The QR code is available for an 1 hour. So I can ride several buses using 1 ticket in 1 hour.

Bus commuting takes 50 minutes from my home to my office door to door because the bus route is long. When I use the bicycle, the route is short and it takes only 15 minutes. I need something enjoyable when I use the bus, for example a book or some music.

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