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Nearest super market from my apartment is Colruyt. I like this because the supermarket is big and has many variety of products and vegetable is fresh. So, I downloaded app to become member ship. There is a problem. it is difficult to registrant because language is Dutch and I can`t read it. When I have enough time, I will proceed to registration using google translation. I want to learn not only English but also Dutch.
Revised by my teacher
The nearest supermarket to my apartment is Colruyt. I like this store because it is large, offers a wide variety of products, and the vegetables are fresh. I downloaded the app to get a membership (to become a member), but I encountered/faced a problem. It is difficult to register because the language is Dutch, which I can’t read. When I have enough time, I will proceed with the registration using Google Translate. I want to learn not only English but also Dutch.
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