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Though I am not familiar with olive, I want to buy it because I see many times that many Belgium people buy it in supermarket. Olive is popular in Europe.
When I went to Italian restraints, they gave marine of olive as appetizer. I didn’t remember taste, because it was so so. I think the reason of popularity of olive is not taste but healthy. When I read article, olive seems to reduce cholesterol.
I will try to eat more olives to be healthy because my meals in Belgium is not healthy. I haven’t taken care about my healthy in Belgium though I had taken care of my health in Japan by eating row fishes and natto.
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Though I am not familiar with olive, I want to buy it because I see many times that many people in Belgium buy it in supermarket. Olive is popular in Europe.
When I went to Italian restaurant they served marine of olive as appetizer for me . I didn’t remember the taste, because it was nothing special just usual I think the reason for the popularity of olive is not the taste but health . When I read articles, olive seems to be a factor that has a role in reducing cholesterol.
I will try to consume more olives to be healthy because my meals in Belgium are not as healthy as back in Japan. I haven’t taken care of my health in Belgium though i used to take care of my health in Japan by eating row fishe and natto.
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